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What does as neutral as possible mean? You can write that an actress has beautiful long hair and a sexy body, that she can move well, or that fans are enthusiastic about her butt. But please avoid wording that could be from an advertising brochure, something like: "Film X is an absolute blast: Susi gives it her all and fucks her way through the entire apartment at world champion level!" Such subjective formulations are completely okay in quotes though, so something like: "Susi: “The shoot was an absolute blast: we gave it our all! My scene partners fucked me all over the apartment at a world-champion level!”". You are welcome to include something like that in the article. Quotes make the article more lively. | What does as neutral as possible mean? You can write that an actress has beautiful long hair and a sexy body, that she can move well, or that fans are enthusiastic about her butt. But please avoid wording that could be from an advertising brochure, something like: "Film X is an absolute blast: Susi gives it her all and fucks her way through the entire apartment at world champion level!" Such subjective formulations are completely okay in quotes though, so something like: "Susi: “The shoot was an absolute blast: we gave it our all! My scene partners fucked me all over the apartment at a world-champion level!”". You are welcome to include something like that in the article. Quotes make the article more lively. | ||
A good book on writing is "Writing Tools (10th Anniversary Edition): 55 Essential Strategies for Every Writer" or "Writing Tools: 50 Essential Strategies for Every Writer". | |||
Please note the [[Pornopedia:Copyrights]]. | Please note the [[Pornopedia:Copyrights]]. |