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What does as neutral as possible mean? You can write that an actress has beautiful long hair and a sexy body, that she can move well, or that fans are enthusiastic about her butt. But please avoid wording that could be from an advertising brochure, something like: "Film X is an absolute blast: Susi gives it her all and fucks her way through the entire apartment at world champion level!" Such subjective formulations are completely okay in quotes though, so something like: "Susi: “The shoot was an absolute blast: we gave it our all! My scene partners fucked me all over the apartment at a world-champion level!”". You are welcome to include something like that in the article. Quotes make the article more lively.
What does as neutral as possible mean? You can write that an actress has beautiful long hair and a sexy body, that she can move well, or that fans are enthusiastic about her butt. But please avoid wording that could be from an advertising brochure, something like: "Film X is an absolute blast: Susi gives it her all and fucks her way through the entire apartment at world champion level!" Such subjective formulations are completely okay in quotes though, so something like: "Susi: “The shoot was an absolute blast: we gave it our all! My scene partners fucked me all over the apartment at a world-champion level!”". You are welcome to include something like that in the article. Quotes make the article more lively.
A good book on writing is "Writing Tools (10th Anniversary Edition): 55 Essential Strategies for Every Writer" or "Writing Tools: 50 Essential Strategies for Every Writer".


Please note the [[Pornopedia:Copyrights]].
Please note the [[Pornopedia:Copyrights]].